Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Final group project

We are planning on doing a campaign for more TCU free student transportation. We have decided that TCU does not provide enough transportation to students. Rhetorically we have chosen to use more logos to appeal to the TCU students with some ethos as well. The logos is going to come from facts that TCU does not provide bus service to certain areas. The ethos will come from the fact that having more bus service will cut down on drunk driving.

Monday, April 27, 2009

group work

Generally I am the leader in a group. I like to be the person who dictates who does what, and organizes everything. I generally am the most organized in a group so it is easy for me to be the leader of the group. I am also very good at keeping people on track and helping promote communication through the group. I am also rather creative and I like to design things. So not only do I like to organize but I also like to do some of the creative work too.

Authors Note on porfolio

Over all my papers are over an article I read about a bill being introduced that would allow liquor stores to be open on Sundays. I'll explain each piece below

My letter to the editor took me a few times to get where I wanted it. At first I was just restating the article and I didn't really understand that I was replying to what was said in the article. I think that I stated my opinion on the subject quickly so it set the style for the rest of the letter. I believe I used good ethos, pathos, and logos to get my point across.

The op-ed was a bit more challenging to me. At first I did not understand what it was. My first draft was a lot more like a letter to the editor. With some help I got the paper to a point I was happy with. I definitely think it uses ethos, pathos, and logos well to support my view of the subject. I stuck with my article as a basis for my paper. It deals with the same issue with a greater focus on the tax benefits. I am happy with the paper and it took me a lot of time to get that way.

My humorous argument I am very happy with. I had some good suggestions on my blog but in the end I was happy with the picture I drew so I didn't change much. I think it is funny and not offensive to my audience. It is a good use of my topic and it conveys it well.

Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Humerous authors note

My funny argument is a picture over my topic. I decided to try and draw what I thought was funny about the article I read. I am by no means an artist but I think it is done well enough to display humor. It is a picture of a pastor giving a prayer and in the middle he looks at the time and thinks to himself that he needs to get liquor and that the liquor store just opened. He then dismisses the congregation so he can buy liquor.

Monday, April 20, 2009

humerous argument

I have decided to draw a funny picture for my humerous argument part of the project. Since my topic is having liquor stores open on sunday I have decided to draw a picture of a pastor of a church wrapping up a sermon at noon on the spot so he can make it to the liquor store before the big game. I am not the best artist but I think it will turn out pretty funny.

Wednesday, April 15, 2009

http://www.cartoonstock.com/newscartoons/cartoonists/rma/lowres/rman900l.jpg

I found this cartoon about a man robbing a liquor store, and he uses the excuse that the liquor store was over stocked. I think it's pretty cute, but it matches my article because it has to do with a liquor store but also the issue of the store being over stocked as a interesting connection. Opening up liquor stores on sundays could possible lower the stock of liquor stores and cut down on the amount of robberies... just a thought. There are a lot of people with opinions about the subject and a cartoon like this lightens up the subject a little bit, adding a new light to the issue.

Monday, April 13, 2009

authors note for op-ed

This is my first draft of the op-ed portion of unit 3. It is still unfinished, no conclusion yet. It is also a bit short but hopefully with the addition of a conclusion and a few tweaks it will meet the requirements. I am unsure if what I have written falls into how a op-ed should be written. I would like some guidance on where my paper needs improvement, mechanically as well as substantively.